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Grammar Starter

Today is all about improving your paragraphs. 

 

What do we need to include? Revisit word bank developed yesterday… can we add any new words?

 

  1. how can we edit and improve this? Ask children for obvious changes… improve our PEE paragraphs.
  2. What do we need to include?
  3. Can we add any new words? 

The following are examples of PEE paragraphs, which include the point, evidence and explanation clearly identified for you.  Please do not be tempted to copy-make sure you write your own. 

Use the above examples to help you improve the quality of your paragraphs. 
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